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Modern Update Map :By ____Ez____

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by T_Rex1, Oct 8, 2015.

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    In my opinion nearby islands have much better and I think most people think so, and I desidi haser islands that are near each other as much as the center so I can not add anything more to the houses by the size of the islands, but I put a lot of details that improved a lot, thanks to their advice.
    Hope you like.
    Anything nesesario add discuss it.
     
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    That spanglish tho. Nice :)
    But i still don't like that the islands are made of stone (try to use different types of stones), and that the grass is just square.
    The islands could have a better shape, since they're just squares with a clipped corner.
    The trees could be better, they are just "bonemealed".

    Bueno, sigue sin gustarme que las islas sean de piedra (intenta usar mas tipos de piedra), y que la hierba en el centro de cada isla sea cuadrada. intenta hacer mas formas naturales.
    Las islas podrian tener mejor forma, porque solo son cuadrados con las esquinas recortadas.
    Los arboles podrian ser mejores, estos solo estan hechos con saplings, intenta crear tu propio arbol.
     
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    something like that 2015-10-08_14.53.45.png
     
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    Although it's an improvement, it's still not good enough. More terraforming and more detail pls.
     
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    I like that you've added colour, but the banners make the houses look like rabbits. The layout is interesting which I like. The terraforming needs a lot of work though, just too plain being stone, also don't bonemeal grass, always place flowers and make little hills or rockeries. The modern houses could look a lot more refined and needs improving, try googling modern houses and try to base a design of that, to get a more realistic finish. Underneath of the islands looked like sphere cut in half, they need to look more realistic. They look a little better than previous versions but, they need to be bigger and beefier. Don't use vanilla miencraft vines, only ever use leaf blocks when making vines. Also don't use a block palette of stone and grass, its just boring try and experiment with lots of different types, till you get one your happy with.
     
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    And I put more decorations cambiosy I hope you like it, And he is right I will take the flags 2015-10-12_12.38.03.png 2015-10-12_12.38.24.png 2015-10-12_12.39.47.png 2015-10-12_12.39.57.png 2015-10-12_12.39.11.png
     
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    You still have bonemealed trees.