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Mixxeduplegos' builder submission

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Mixeduplegos, Oct 30, 2014.

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  1. Mixeduplegos

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    Hi, the whole map has a backsotry for itself, there has been a complete climate change, causing eruptions, mutant organisms, and extremely quick changes between seasons,etc... I hope you like it as this is my first plot. Also, there is just a itty bit I have to finish, but it's underground, so... ignore this previous comment.
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    Finished underground thing! Also forgot to take picture of my desert lol. Here ya go...
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    I like the terraforming, that looks good.

    However, there isn't enough detail on the walls of your house, in a couple of places, the colours are all over the place, so you have sand, quarts, two Tyler of wood, leaves, then blue windows when the thing next to it is orange.
    I would suggest making the walls multiple layers thick, so that you can add more depth and detail to the walls, then make sure you have a specific block palet so that you connect specific parts of the build and it isn't all over the place.
    Also, a roof can make or break a house, you should spend time detailing them, maybe adding in some windows, chimneys, maybe just some fences or cobblestone walls going up it in a line.
    Your custom trees look like cubes of leaves stuck on wood/ice.. Redo the trees and add a bit of shape to the leaves.
    There still is a couple of blank, green spaces, try and do something with them.
    Apart from the mountain, all the land is flat from what I see, and although the land near a river is generally flat geographicaly, I doubt it's that flat then a mountain on the other side.
    All the river on the side of snow should be frozen, instead of little bits in one section.
    Also, if there are quick changes inbetween seasons, and the river is near where it's been snowing, the river should probably be flooding a tiny bit of land, especially considering there's a desert next to it, causing the snow to melt into the river, maybe add a small river near where the desert is of snow melting and going into the river?

    Aand long constructive criticism over.
     
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    Wow thats a lot, I apreciate all the criticism but the trees were supposed to look blocky, other than that I guess I can change their style, I ll try to improve the roofs right now, but I think i will leave the detail on walls for another project as double layering the houses would take too much space. I'm stil ladding little bits to fill the green spaces, and now that I really look at it, I do feel that more terraforming should occur on the other side of the river but at this stage I dont know how natural i can make it look without moving anything. I'll try the flood but I didnt really understanf fully what you were trying to say. The only reason why there isn't more ice is because I just generally dont like how it looks, personal preference really...

    Finally, I filled a little space I had with a block song! The chorus of Do I wanna know from artic monkeys on bass... so come check it out guys.
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    Just wanted to add a skyview so u can see I used most of the space...

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    Was multitasking and revising for geography at the same time.. My bad
     
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    Nice use of the plot and very nice terraforming :) Though I think the homes and little village is not as detailed as it could potentially be. Maybe more detail on the walls of the house as most of them seam kind of flat. Hope this helped and best of luck!
     
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    I like the terraforming, but I don't like how there is a snow biome next to the desert.
     
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    It's pretty good for the most part. There are a few things that look kinda weird though, like the big glass ball and the random hole o' death with glowstone in it. Definitely one of the better apps I've seen though.
     
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