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Kahan Apply for Builder

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Kahan, Mar 30, 2015.

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  1. Kahan

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    Hey guys, here I bring a wonder that I have done in the creative CubecraftGames to participate and if they give me the opportunity to be a builder in this beautiful server, sorry for the mistakes that are, say what my best, I hope you like it. @Efcluke94@ @Discoloration@ @TheAdventurerMM@ The important thing here is that I had fun and learned with great maturity! Thank You.
    PLOT ID: -35;203 TP in plot /plot tp -35;203 [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG]
     
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    What exactly is the theme of the build? And it's lacking detail, as well as could use more terraforming.
     
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    I wanted to be original, if you already lacks detail, but if you see it in the game is impossible to say what is wrong, I wanted to mix two designs, something old and abandoned with environmental
     
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    Please do not post the same builder application more than once, it shows that you are impatient. Also, please do not bump threads within a few minutes (you replied to the other thread for no reason other than to bump) it takes a while for builders to see it (up to a few days) and we want to see patient builders :)
     
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    Could use some more terraforming. The plot is pretty flat. Also try to use the whole plot. Add underground caves, and birds in the sky.

    In my opinion, the house also needs some more detail.

    Its looks nice, but it doesnt have the wow factor to me. Sorry
     
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    It was not to be impatient, just wanted to fix the post since you can not edit or delete, decided to recreate it, sorry :)
     
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    Yes, I miss details, but detail is not so easy ... I gave my best, not sad work because if you look at the game and truthful huge difference, the images are not on all sides, I ask you what see for yourself ;)
     
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    This is lacking all of these: Depth, Detail, Terraforming, Block variants, Custom Trees. There is 1 or 2 custom trees, But everywhere else is vanilla. They help with the build a lot. Also as I said you have no depth it seems. Add indents into the wall and such. Detail ties in with block variants. Choosing blocks that compliment or contrast can help a lot. Also as you are going with the worn down feel on the castle (based on the vines) add cracked blocks maybe some slabs at the ground, even a few holes.
     
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    Yes! You're right, I'm working hard, so I go now ... The pictures you send, were an equal avanze have to keep working. Watch this. I insist you have to see in the game, is not the same as seeing a picture![​IMG]
     
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    Still, try using less bonemeal on the trees and make more custom ones.
     
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    YES!
     
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    Terraforming.
     
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    I FINISH! [​IMG]
     
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    Screenshots tell us so many things about the build, and so far, your build lacks so much detail. It doesn't matter if we look at it in Minecraft, or if we jump up and down with one foot, it still looks the same. Actually seeing your plot in Minecraft doesn't eliminate the factors you're missing, which are stated in the prior comments. As for the new and improved build, it still lacks detail. Adding a handful of bonemealed trees/land, doesn't cover up the lack of terraforming. The castle also lacks variation in blocks. I like how much effort you put into this, but you can do a lot better.
     
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    Thanks!
     
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    I think it needs a litle bit short hills mote terraforming and to be a litle bit menous random In my opinion
     
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