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Just here to get opinions

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Cubss, Jun 18, 2015.

  1. Cubss

    Cubss Member

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    Hey I just wanted to know if i could get a few of your opinions on my latest build. I know a decent amount of you have seen it but feel free to leave your opinion as well. :p

    Plot id: 705:713

    This is my modern plot if you cant tel the theme by the houses and the yacht the terrain I wanted to be something tropical so i used my own kind of palm tree. Enough of me blabbering as I always do. Hope you enjoy and come and look up close ;) 2015-06-18_22.32.57.png 2015-06-18_22.33.05.png 2015-06-18_22.33.14.png
     
  2. Cubss

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    Might add the one of the waterfall too but to see the interiors you will have to c'mere :D
     

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    o my
    that is vv good
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    I approve. c:
     
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    My waterfall <3
     
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    looksa wesome and:
    "Take armour off"
    "I have white stuff tho" ;)

    sound s like a *ehem* scene
     
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    ... i dont want to live on this planet anymore
     
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    nuuu <3
     
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    other than that, Cubs its great c;
     
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    I'm not the best with modern builds, so I can't give you many tips, but I liked it. The terraforming on the right island looks a bit unnatural. I don't know how it would look, but some birds or beach chairs might add to the tropical feeling. Aside from that good job Cubs, looks great! ;)
     
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    You already know what I think about this cubs, my opinion is not necessary here.
    I LOVE all your builds.
    BUILDER RANK PLS
     
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    Yacht needs work, add more block variety and accessories, i.e. Chairs, stone brick? Engravings, maybe jet streams from behind, change the spruce floor up by adding furnitures, just spice it up. (Cough cough banners cough)

    Love the terraforming and block choice. You could make the bottom of the harbor less flat with the seawood though, by putting sand in between, not priority. Imo to make it look great you could experiment with adding leaf bushes (you know, the ones on floors and such) hang over the cliff, down to the beach to help negate the boring dull grey rock. Just an idea though, but it might spruce your build up a bit.

    Like what Terr said ^^, birds, chairs, some small boat docks, campfires, clouds, fishing boats, etc. to add to the tropical feel. Try to add someting to the air and underground though (behind the waterfall?) so all parts of the plot are used and it feels "full."

    You could also possibly add a few more slabs, add a fishing hut on the shore, a tool shed on the mainlaid, etc.

    And most importantly...

    USE BANNERS!! You'd be absolutely stunned at how good they make builds look. YT it, or I can link some builds that cleverly used them to achieve great detail and a "wow factor." Even going further as incorporating some of the other 1.8 blocks would be even better.

    Overall, a good build, nice job Cubs 0> (<- suppose to be a chicken)
     
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    If you are smart enough to find the hidden lever there is something behind the waterfall ;) but thanks for all the comments so far I will attempt to add what you guys said to add to the build thank you :D
     
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    I likey c;
     
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    I like the terraforming good Job cubsie
     
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    Thanks awen and Rick. :D
     
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    I quite like it/