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Input Needed on Build In Progess

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Oceanical, Mar 7, 2014.

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  1. Oceanical

    Oceanical Member

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    Hi guys ! I just built this yesterday and am starting to build my Builder's Application. I know it's not much,
    but before I progress any further,

    I'd love some input and especially some constructive criticism.
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    Thanks!
     

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  2. speedcrafter64

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    its butyful
     
  3. Oceanical

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    Constructive criticism? #thirstyforcriticism
     
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    Constructive Critism: Finish da building so we can judge it as a whole but I like it so far, it looks really good and well-built, many different types of blocks and different colours, I like it.
     
  5. Efcluke94

    Efcluke94 Admin Staff Member Head Administrator Builder

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    Am going to be super critical btw, so hold on to something...

    Obviously its work in progress so its difficult to assess all aspects of it, however personally its got too much detail, and looks over complexed, for a player, to understand what it is. Am guessing its a medieval/rustic house. If its rustic then use wooden fences as windows, however you have used fences and glass, pick one type. Never! use texture packs when building, unless its faithful (nicer looking defualt) texture packs can make a build look weird if you are looking at it in default, and not everyone has your specific texture pack. Stick to the theme! Once you have completed this house, keep this theme running on all your builds on the plot, don't have all the buildings the same structure, mix it up to show a more diverse town. Add height to make your buildings appear more epic and to add range and variety. Alot of people neglect roofs, by just having stairs, add chimneys/balcony's/Windows/borders, were you see fit. Also if your applying for builder, USE ALL OF THE PLOT. Adding underground things or things in the air, really impress me personally, or adding little touches because they can be the deciding factor. Also could you link the plot ID so I could have a closer look, thanks! Hope this helped. @caliocean
     
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    I agree to some of that.
     
  8. Oceanical

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    Thankyou for the input Efcluke & Claudia. But since I've read the Builder's thread I've decided to restart & start building a more unique and creative build. I'll keep the advice in mind :)
     
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    wow that is good detail
     
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    ;D *clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap* luke you could of told meh some of dat...
    JKS
     
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