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i can get builder? :)

Discussion in 'Creative' started by AdictiveLP, May 21, 2015.

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  1. AdictiveLP

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    hi, i create a plot in creative mi name is AdictiveLP
    mi plot id is: -148;-217
     

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    This is not builder worthy. The lack of detail in the buildings and the lack of terraforming makes it look like you only spend a short amount of time on it. Things you can improve include changing the houses to a better state, the house in the farm back has its walls completely brick, which is not very detailed, as for the house in front, it's okay, but it's very low and it doesn't have the right style, and both of them have funny roofs. The terraforming is good, but it only overs up a small area. As for the tree, it doesn't look as realistic as some other trees, and it's trunk is just straight up 4 blocks.

    That's all my constructive criticism for now.
     
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    I will try to improve it :)
    thanks
     
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    but if much improved if the ground would get the range?
    thanks again :)
     
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    If you practise your English and if your build is builder-worthy we would consider it.
     
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    We have a very high standard for what it takes to become a builder. For examples, you should check out other builder applications to see the amount of work others have put into their apps.
     
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    sorry my english is very bad xd
     
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    All thats said above is correct, take them all in xP Create another thread if you would like to apply again, due to me locking this as it's not up to the standards we're looking for:(
     
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