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Henryawesomedude's Hide N Seek Map Submission- Beach

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Henry, May 30, 2014.

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Should this map be added?

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  1. Henry

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    I am submitting a new hide n seek map. It's called the beach. Feel free to lock my old beach thread because it no longer needs to be used. Here are screenshots of what the map looks like. If you have suggestions to improve the map, please let me know in the comments.
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    @Henry This looks much better! I like the interior decoration but i Think the exterior needs just a bit more work. Try adding light umbrellas, seats, e.c.t
     
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    thx for the help
     
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    It's a good start! What I'd recommend is getting rid of the current buildings and focusing more on the beach aspect of the map. It's a really fun and unique idea and I'd love to see it take shape. I really like the umbrellas and the haybale huts/booths toward the north, but the buildings are somewhat lacking. I'd recommend adding a ton of foliage like palm/coconut trees, low-lying shrubbery like you see in jungle biomes. With a bit of creativity and hard work, this could easily be a really fun and interesting map. (Also I'm really flattered that you like my maps. ^_^ <3)
     
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    Thank you, tacos.
     
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    Nice start, but needs lots of outside details. :)
     
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    added foliage and deleted 2 buildings :) 2014-05-31_15.45.34.png
     
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    Add terriforming.. It's too flat.
     
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    Make it look more like a natural beach.
     
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    Trees are a great touch! The big sandstone building and the smaller stone and glass one are kinda strange to have on a beach. I'm not sure what they are, but they could probably use some work. Try googling some pictures of beaches, private islands, resorts, etc. That's what I did for my Wild West and Venice maps.
     
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    The big building is a hotel and the other 2 are to give people places to hide
     
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    I will be deleting my beach and doing a different theme. you'll have to wait until I make it to find out the theme. I really hope my third try will work. can I please get a lock on here? @PinkStr3ak @LaserDolphin77
     
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