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Hammy53's Builder Application.

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Religious Melon, May 18, 2014.

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    I'll have some more screens tommorow. :D
     
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    Ty :D
     
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    It's nice, but maybe could we see it without the Shaders mod? Or whatever mod is making the pictures look more enhanced?
     
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    Couldn't you just go to the plot without a texture pack on yourself? Lazy :p

    Tagging luke because he's a builder.. And online.. @Efcluke94
     
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    He was already tagged, @OrangeGrapeEater. Anyway, the roofs could use some touching up, because if you look at the sixth and seventh picture, the roof doesn't fit with the build, nor does it look good in general. You have potential, and try using another plot to show different styles that include different materials, for example, angelic. If you need another plot one can be given to you from me. You would just need to write down the coordinates of the plot so you don't forget.
     
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    The only reason I used that roof was because I couldn't think of anything elses :p

    Also, I am not really sure what an angelic plot would look like?
     
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    I'm not very good at it, but if you look up pictures of it you might be able to get a feel for it, you could also try something like modern, or elven.
     
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    Okay am going to use a load of pics to explain, since they can say 1000 words.

    LaserDolphins Medieval Build: This is the standard you should aim for when building medieval. TBH laser is the best at medieval, and even I would have trouble beating this, but when builders judge, we will compare ourselves and other builders, and we already have someone who is amazing at medieval. So that's why its best to show off as many themes as possible, which laser has already said.
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    Now for the roofs, all the roofs are quite boring except the windmill, you need to break up from the wood, by using stonebrick/cobble as a divider, add chimneys or balcony's. The example I have given is of a cottage house I made, using haybales, now I have used maybe 4 different types of blocks, instead of one. The roof is just as important as the rest of the build, never just use wooden planks.
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    The lava plot you have made, is lacking a lot. It still has a flat ground, which isn't very interesting.. it looks amazing with the shaders mod, but not many people have the shaders mod. Here is an example of Formelet terrarforming with his dragon, as you can see he has tried to make the ground look jagged/dangerous to represent the feel of a harsh environment.
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    Back to medieval plot.. look at my last post on this thread.. you should never bonemeal. https://www.cubecraftgames.net/threads/inspiration-thread.4472/page-2

    Sorry about being so critical, but the standard of builder has risen, due to the fact it is growing, so we constantly compare with other builders. You actually are a decent builder, but you still need work. The terrarforming on your medieval plot is good, it is quite creative, with the floating island, I like the fact that you added a mine. I like that your skywars map resembles a skyblock island.. the volcano has a very creative explosion. Although you just need some more work.
     
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    I think you have great potential. GL :)
     
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    THE SHADERS MOD IS SO BEAUTIFUL<3
    I like this, but the buildings need more detail :)
     
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    Should I post the next screenshots with or without shaders?
     
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    Without shaders, so we can see what it looks like to the 'typical' minecraft player.
     
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    More screens... I went for a modern theme.
     

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    A tower thingy?
     

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