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First time terra-forming, need feedback for improvement.

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Xycheth, May 4, 2014.

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  1. Xycheth

    Xycheth Member

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    Uhm, well.. Hello there, This is pretty much my first terraform built.

    I would love to get feedbacks from everyone as possible so I could improve my build more,
    My first build is spaceships, it's not really a terra-form spaceship doe but I did not print screen any.
    My current plot now is the first terra-form I've been talking about, It's actually a landscape with spikes (probably) with a small cave, iced pokeball, too.

    Hope you guys like it, would love a feed back. Thanks!

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    Thanks for viewing.
     
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    It is very good, but on some things, you have followed the same sort of pattern everytime, in a natural build, they do not do that.
     
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    Looks good, but like @Bananaboy21 said, less smooth = more natural.
     
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    This is really cool looking, but I think that you need to make it less angular. Rounder edges make it looks better in my opinion. (For the hills anyways)
     
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    Hmm, make it more smooth, less bumps & sharp edges. Make it look more natural & less boxy. Good for a first attempt though.
     
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    Nice for a first try at terraforming, it just needs to be more organic and natural so it doesnt look like you actually built it :)
     
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