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Far West - New And First Map I Made!

Discussion in 'Games' started by AlbertoGorilla123, Mar 8, 2015.

  1. AlbertoGorilla123

    AlbertoGorilla123 Member

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    H i every one!

    i would like to show the FIRST map i made for SKYWARS!

    if any mod see this, i hope you will leave a comment :)

    if you want to put it to play tell me please :D i will be so happy :D

    BYEE!!!!!! <3
     

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    It's a lot like wild west... just less details. I don't really like it, sorry.
     
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    Add more terraforming and it'll be great! Good first attempt
     
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    This map needs more terraforming. There is a lot of flat spaces on the islands and it does not make the island look very detailed at all. Another thing is that the islands are almost perfect circles, add a bit more randomisation to this map for it to look better. I'm sorry but I don't think this is detailed enough. Keep working on it and take everyone's ideas and criticism into consideration. :)
     
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    Nah, not my thing, sorry.
     
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    I know this map would be full of errors, that was my first attempt... :)
    Thanks to all of you for giving me your opinion, i will keep working on it!
    thanks to all of you! :)
     
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    Good luck!
     
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    Do you seen my plot on creative? I made a with the same middle and the same desing... I ddin't finished that map because there are not space for finish it ...
     
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    My main problem with this build, is that the islands look like clay, sand, and dust oreos.

    Other than that, I just feel that the islands themselves might need a bit more detail, especially on the building's design.
     
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    Wild west is a hidenseek map...