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Criticize me please! - Build Discussion

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Vinny, Apr 17, 2014.

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How am I doing?

  1. A step forward overall!

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  2. Made it look worse :(

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  1. Vinny

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    So I failed at becoming a builder again but i'm not ready to back down. Please help me by giving constructive criticism on my builds as I post updates of them as they become more complete. Please avoid simply bagging on my builds - In simpler terms don't troll or be immature about this).

    Anyway here are my builds:

    The 'floaty one' is supposed to be an Air Ship being bombarded with cannon fire and being shot out of the sky while burning. It's a little hard to tell that (or so i've been told)

    The second is an update of the previously only terraformed plot. I have added two custom trees and a modern home with a dock. I plan on adding a boat, more trees and updating the dock to be less bland.

    Please feel free to let your imaginations roam and let me know what you think I should add to these builds.

    Also if you havent voted above please do so. It helps me a ton!
     
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    Hmm, well the ship is overall very detailed, and the structure is good. The terraforming plot can do way better, like maybe a bit more houses, a good boat at the dock, and maybe at the top of the hill add something there.
     
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    @SevereWarning I was thinking another structure on the hill area. Im not sure what but as for "a bit more houses" I dont know where I could fit them haha. Also if anyone has any suggestions on what to build next I'll take them :) Thanks Severe for the feedback!
     
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    Build something related to the plot you built with minimooseha, without his help and something entirely newly structured.
     
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