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Cataclysmic Destruction - Build for Builder

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Pegozo, Aug 1, 2015.

  1. Pegozo

    Pegozo Member

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    Hi everyone. My original language is spanish, so my english is not the better, I know... :p
    I finish my build project, and I want show to u all.
    I want be part of the team of Builders. I was builder on another server recognized.

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    My second plot ID: 5000;-5001
    (This plot is owned of Macaco_Gamer, my cousin, he does not play creative mode)
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    All builds created by me, Pegozo.
    No helpers.
    No world edit.
    No texture packs needed.

    I present my first plot finished for a Builder rank.
    /p tp 5000;-5000

    I hope you like it :D
     
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  2. Terrarialover11

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    The bridge was pretty good! But the terraforming could use some some work, so you might want to work on that. Good luck :D
     
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    It looks great! terraforming could do with some work, but it seems like it still needs things adding to it as it looks kind of empty.
     
  4. Pegozo

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    I did not want to do a weighted base. I prefer a base more natural and realist... I do not have much room to do more things, so this is my plot.
    I shaped the land to my taste, and this is the result.
    The project is finished, I do not seek advice, but thanks for the constructive criticism.
     
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    This is gr8 m8 <3
     
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    I've seen this plot in the past (Ayy :3) and I like the concept, the terraforming could be done a little better though.
     
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    Feels a bit empty to me and I agree that the terraforming isn't as good as it could be.
     
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    1. The bridge looks nice.
    2. The terrafroming need a lot more detail.
    3. Your English is not good enough for builder.

    4. ^

    Good luck :D
     
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    3. Well, we have Spanish speaking staff, so they can help him. :p
     
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    UP ^-^
     
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    The bridge looks good. You chose the right type of blocks and combined them. As peepz already said like 10 times, the terraforming really needs work, now I know thst you built like trees and things, but if you take for example my plot: 212;-214 ( Build in progress ) I made like a mountain and a type of well ridge and hills, trees and those things. If you would do that a little more it would already be a lot better.
    I hope that you changed your mind now... ( so you do want to change the terraforming ) . You also have a nice river which needs no change like my taste.

    ~Good luck tho!
     
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  12. Pegozo

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    Terraforming changed.
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    That already looks alot better! Gj!
     
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    You want it to look realistic, well it doesn't. My advice is if you build a plot, you terraform everthing first so it makes a nice landscape where you can build on. The plot also seems a little plain, when going for builder you need to use EVERYTHING of your plot, it needs to have interesting things in every corner! Your custom trees look a bit derpy too, make them look more realistic. As for the bridge, I don't get it, you have the bridge and a piece of it fell down, where's the rest of the bridge though? Shouldn't it continue after the gap? I think I've said enough, it has potential yeah, but we don't recruit potential builders anymore.
     
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    I change my build, improving terraforming. And I tried to detail the landscape. I'm sure it will improve other details
    I can not finish the bridge since that I have limited space...
    Thank for u criticism, Maybe later get better.
     
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    Pictures would be been nice too :p and you might want to wait until creative stops crashing. I'm not sure if that build was done, but the terraforming was alright. It was a bit odd at the top. I would've made some trees because that's a pretty essential part of a lot of builds. Also you should mix up the blocks a bit more with things like gravel, cobblestone, andesite, or other similar blocks.
     
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    Haha, I know, but I had time to details...
    U can visit the plot: /p tp 5000;-5001 (owner: Macaco_Gamer my cousin) But you've seen that I am the builder.
    My plot official: /p tp 5000;-5000

    :)