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[Builders Application]

Discussion in 'Creative' started by ExtendedHorizons, Apr 11, 2015.

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  1. ExtendedHorizons

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    Hey guys ExtendedHorizons here. I want to apply for builder... so here goes. I worked very hard on this and I hope I can at least get to the next faze. I want to get to be the best of the best of builders and I wont give up untill I get there. I hope you guys will accept this application. Thanks ~ Extended
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    I wasn't in any of the pics D: But overall I really like it gj :)
     
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    It's very good, just lacks a bit of detail. Yes the building is nice but it doesn't fit the scene. Just a random building in the middle of a plains. You need to give your builds a back story. Anyways good luck. :)
     
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    @__Scotty__ Yeah It was hard to make a theme that fit the build due to lack of space since the build took up a lot of space or else I would've made a theme to fit along. Thanks for the input.
     
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    Let's hope the best happens and you get a test build.
     
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    Can you show us the inside, I'd love to see the detail on the inside. I'd also like to see more than just one plot for the build app, as most builds have a variety of things to show other than just one plot. ;) But overall, I LOVE the build, the detail is amazing too. :)
     
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    @SevereWarning I decided not to do an interior. A lot of people might think its stupid but I truthfully didnt have any inspiration for the inside or else I would've done it.
     
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    Hello,
    This is a really nice plot, good to do a Builder Application, i have some advices.
    - The middle Build is just Amazing, i really like it, it's very good detailed and has a very good combination of blocks and Colors
    -The trees are nice too, i think they need a little more of detail agreed to the construction.
    -I think the Middle build need an Interior, it can be more beautiful and striking.
    Everything who is around the middle Build need more details and Light for ./night users, you can be creative with it. (-1 for that).

    The picures are in a low definition, this is just an extra, :p ;

    First, light problem ; (Brightness is full)
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    Second, Around it details needed ;
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    My conclusion is :
    It's a really nice Build with a lot of nice details and work in it, but i can improve.


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    MY NUMBER 300 POST, OH MY GOD <3.
     
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    I like that you made a big detailed build in the center of the plot, but I would like to see you make a smaller build, perhaps a house and see if you can put just as much detail, even more. (Maybe make it on a separate plot) Oh, and I would highly recommend decorating the interior - the inside is just as "wowing" as the outside.
     
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    First of all, I don't think that only one build would show your potential in building, I'd say you should try different themes and structures before applying, second of all I liked this build but it didn't exactly give me the "wow" aspect, some of the points in the build were really unnatural, weird or plain. The walls were too plain in my opinion, just felt like they could have been a lot more better with a bit more variety or detail, some of the trees looked really derpy and just seemed unnatural , and the top of the structure made me feel like it wasn't complete though it was, besides those points I'd also say add more plants to the land scape. You can see these as nitpicking but these are just my honest opinions.
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    @SGTkuzey thanks redoing the trees and working on detail for those areas. Thanks for the feedback dude :D
     
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    You're not bad at building, don't get me wrong, but honestly you aren't active enough to become a builder in my opinion.
     
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    I really like the overall build. It's nice and detailed, but as everyone said, it can totally improve. For one, the building at the center takes all of the attention. It has the highest detail, but you forgot that the surroundings matter as well. The terrain is sort of flat, and it's lacking terraforming. Also, it seems as if there's not a big variety of blocks. From what I see, I can only identify 7 or so different types of blocks. The block palette is a bit odd, but nothing too major. I do, however, like the way you built this, but it seems to be lacking a theme. It seems like a deserted mansion thing in the middle of the plains. Of course there's a lot of detail, but you're missing creativity. Try building some other things on different plots and let us know how that turns out. This definitely has potential, but it very well be improved upon.

    Like Nano said, being Builder is no easy job. You have to work a lot and make everything really good. Your work will be displayed for thousands of people, so the quality really needs to be high.
     
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    @NanoNet @Iselciour I've only been inactive because I completely changed my school life and I was also on a long trip and I have a major fever. And for building I work my butt off. Also creative is laggy so its annoying when it crashes a lot and i'm redoing the trees and also adding detail to the areas people pointed out. And as for the block palette in my opinion anything over 8 would be over doing it at least for a building. And for the terrain is also very hard to do on this plot because there is no space left for terrain due to the main building taking up most of the space. And for the quality Ill work my butt off and this has been a mile goal for a long time so I can build with better builders and be pushed to the limit so I can improve. If this gets accepted it would be a dream come true. Thanks for the feedback though :D
     
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    Edited the swearing to a less inappropriate word, next time, it will be a warning point.
     
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