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Discussion in 'Creative' started by Arman_S, Mar 20, 2015.

  1. Arman_S

    Arman_S Member

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    I would like to be a builder.
    I hope it's good.
     
  2. Aimee2323

    Aimee2323 Sr. Mod Staff Member Sr. Moderator

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    It looks decent, but it's nowhere near enough talent that I think a builder would need, for a start there's a massive empty place in the middle of the plot. It's something that's been build many times before, and there's nothing special about it. Then there's an unattractive parkour on the plot. There is some detail, but not quite enough. Also, don't use a texture pack whilst submitting/building because most people use default, so that (or faithful) is advised. There isn't much to it as far as interior goes. Generally, it looks like something most people could easily build instead of something that makes you go "wow"
     
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    You need to make a proper application.
     
  4. Driii

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    1.) the build isn't even in our server from what I saw in the video.
    2.) you have a texture pack on.
    3.) there's like no detail.
    4.) it's not good enough imo.
    Try building it on our server, add isn't detail and try to be a little original with builds you submit for builder, I've seen way too many of the same styles.
     
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    I was not ready in the middle
     
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    Add some detail*
     
  7. Arman_S

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    Its pretty decent but I don't think Its up to builders standard :p