1. This site uses cookies. By continuing to use this site, you are agreeing to our use of cookies. Learn More.

Builder application

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Suicide_Bunny, May 2, 2015.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Suicide_Bunny

    Suicide_Bunny Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2015
    Messages:
    11
    Likes Received:
    4
    Trophy Points:
    3
    Gender:
    Male
    Hi there,


    This is my creation in creative. It's a (small) sky world, and this is the first time that I made a sky world so hope you guys like it. My plot Id is: 56;-211 and my IGN is: Suicide_Bunny.

    I have Skype but I don't want to write my skype name here because other people can see it.
    My English is not very good because I'm from the Netherlands, but I do my best.

    Greets, Suicide_Bunny A.K.A. Youri








    image.jpg image.jpg image.jpg image.jpg image.jpg image.jpg image.jpg image.jpg
     
    Colourlight and FightingLiger like this.
  2. noodles77

    noodles77 Member

    Joined:
    Jan 30, 2014
    Messages:
    937
    Likes Received:
    1,151
    Trophy Points:
    93
    Occupation:
    Hobo
    Location:
    Town of Salem
    Those 2 large buildings were the only things that I found appealing in this build.
     
  3. Accountrowan01

    Accountrowan01 Member

    Joined:
    Nov 13, 2014
    Messages:
    355
    Likes Received:
    505
    Trophy Points:
    93
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    The Netherlands
    It looks nice, I like the idea. But the terraforming is not really good, and the islands need a lot more detail.
     
  4. Suicide_Bunny

    Suicide_Bunny Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2015
    Messages:
    11
    Likes Received:
    4
    Trophy Points:
    3
    Gender:
    Male
    Okay, thx for the tip
     
  5. TheAdventurerMM

    TheAdventurerMM Member

    Joined:
    Mar 29, 2014
    Messages:
    1,237
    Likes Received:
    1,202
    Trophy Points:
    113
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    the Netherlands
    And you can do way more with an 80 x 80 plot.
     
    YounB, kkbubble, BlueMoon475 and 2 others like this.
  6. Driii

    Driii Member

    Joined:
    Feb 25, 2014
    Messages:
    997
    Likes Received:
    1,842
    Trophy Points:
    93
    Take advantage of all the space in the plot, heck, you could even have multiple levels of islands all over if you wanted. Also, try making custom trees instead of bonemealed :D
     
  7. Suicide_Bunny

    Suicide_Bunny Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2015
    Messages:
    11
    Likes Received:
    4
    Trophy Points:
    3
    Gender:
    Male
    Some of the trees aren't bonemealed
     
  8. johnyestaloca

    johnyestaloca Member

    Joined:
    Oct 12, 2014
    Messages:
    1,171
    Likes Received:
    2,119
    Trophy Points:
    113
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    The land of the holy icecreams
    So some others are? Ew :(
     
    Trickmaster likes this.
  9. Trickmaster

    Trickmaster Member

    Joined:
    May 23, 2014
    Messages:
    1,178
    Likes Received:
    926
    Trophy Points:
    113
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    Potato Heaven
    For the terraforming, try making a few bigger islands (without flat tops) and build something bigger than those towers. Also, on the underside of the islands try alternating your block choice, such as switching flat stone with cobble, stone brick, mossy cobble, etc.

    P.S. Suicide_Bunny might not be the best name for a server that has young kids in it :p
     
  10. Suicide_Bunny

    Suicide_Bunny Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2015
    Messages:
    11
    Likes Received:
    4
    Trophy Points:
    3
    Gender:
    Male
    Hahaha, I took the name because my friends have the names: Suicide_Fox, Suicide_Panda and Suicide_Chicken XD
     
  11. Snap

    Snap Mod Staff Member Moderator

    Joined:
    May 1, 2014
    Messages:
    6,931
    Likes Received:
    4,892
    Trophy Points:
    113
    Gender:
    Female
    I love it :D
     
  12. eshuren1

    eshuren1 Member

    Joined:
    Feb 3, 2014
    Messages:
    2,382
    Likes Received:
    965
    Trophy Points:
    113
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    My Laptop
    I just like how theres one random little nether themed island in there. It makes no sense with the plot but I like evil stuff so ye :33
     
    Trickmaster and YounB like this.
  13. boyracer10

    boyracer10 Member

    Joined:
    Sep 4, 2014
    Messages:
    212
    Likes Received:
    46
    Trophy Points:
    28
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    fnhfnhsg
    Location:
    Uk
    Clearly steampunk is in your nature and you have potential but like everyone else said the buildings stand out more. Ecuador of the lack of terraforming. Especially the trees. Instead of just growing normal trees. Make some by hand. Watch some vids on YouTube that's what I do. Get inspiration!
     
    Colourlight likes this.
  14. rick4games

    rick4games Member

    Joined:
    Jan 31, 2015
    Messages:
    464
    Likes Received:
    302
    Trophy Points:
    63
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    nub
    Location:
    united states (but im dutch)
    just a tip try to make custom trees and succes
     
    Colourlight likes this.
  15. iOreos

    iOreos Member

    Joined:
    May 1, 2015
    Messages:
    395
    Likes Received:
    109
    Trophy Points:
    43
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    Portugal
    i have a sensation I've seen these buildings somewhere
     
    Colourlight likes this.
  16. SamueLogic

    SamueLogic Member

    Joined:
    Nov 2, 2014
    Messages:
    1,337
    Likes Received:
    1,171
    Trophy Points:
    113
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Student
    Location:
    Colombia
    I like it, but, is not that ''OH MY GOD'' build for a builder apply.
     
    Pingu_, YounB and Colourlight like this.
  17. SunLord

    SunLord Member

    Joined:
    Mar 11, 2014
    Messages:
    386
    Likes Received:
    418
    Trophy Points:
    63
    Gender:
    Female
    All that has said been above should be taken into high consideration.. At the moment we're looking for something we've never seen done/used before. Although you must of been a lot of effort into it, it's not something that I would like to see for say.. A spawn. To really wow us I would redo this all and create something unique.. Like combining themes.. Custom tree forest.. Using a base of a film... But anyway, good effort was put into this, and as Nood said the houses were really cool, but just not up to the standards we're looking for right now.. Thanks for the submission and remember there's always room for improvement so never give up:D
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.