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Discussion in 'Creative' started by BlooSploosh, Apr 26, 2015.

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  1. BlooSploosh

    BlooSploosh Member

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    Many people told me I wouldn't get it. But i'm trying anyway.
    Plot ID: -207;-3
    Its supposed to be a canyon/ridge of some sort.
    P.S. theres 4 hidden places in the plot. Can you find them all? ^-^
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    It looks nice, but it doesnt have the wow factor. Sorry :(
     
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    Overall it is a very good build. There is one thing that I don't like, that is the wood for a dirty type feel. The texture doesn't have the same look as if there was dirt there. Also I would consider doing more than one build if you want to go for builder.
     
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    It just doesn't have the "wow" part that we need, when I looked at it, all I saw was a pile of wood and water. Terraforming alone will not get you builder. Try something else and see what you can do with it :p
     
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    The terraforming is nice though there isn't really anything special about this that is enough for you to get builder.
     
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    I like the idea and It looks nice, but it need a lot more detail.
     
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    What he said.
    Build an amazing house or something different than terraforming, it shows multiple skill levels and I am fairly sure that all of the current builders can terraform to the level that you did.
    Make yourself stand out, build something unique that's not terraforming.
     
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    Try instead of building something thats only terra forming build something like a house and then terra form the rest
     
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    Thanks for all the feedback but i would just like to remind you guys that i know this probably won't get me in, and this won't be my last application, I WILL be trying for more plots.
    Thanks
     
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    It needs a core or center piece that draws our eye to it, because honestly when I looked at the build I was trying to look for something that wasn't there & there was no main aspect or meaning to it, just a bunch of terraforming. Try to expand on the terraforming and build pieces related to what' you've already started. I like the Mediterranean / Caribbean esque theme.
     
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    You might not get builder from it but if it means anything, i think it's very good :) Well done c:
     
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    It looks nice, But it's not Wowy.
    Try to make more?
     
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    I can see why people told you that (no offense) It's a great try, but it's a bit strange? And it does need a bit more detail, but I'm glad you tried, just keep practising.
     
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    Jaja nice building do u remember me dd obsidian guy?
     
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    @caliocean hey ur image is from the dark said if u do it for cookies just ask @Saradabaschi remember the copyright XD
     
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    Saradabaschi Admin Staff Member Administrator

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    She actually sent the image to me ;) But this is completely off topic.

    @Efcluke94, since I know that you love to make final decisions. ;P
     
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    Efcluke94 Admin Staff Member Head Administrator Builder

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    It's pretty simple, there isn't that much on the plot, it just doesn't really make sense. You need a lot more added to become a possible builder, like a lot more
     
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