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Discussion in 'Creative' started by rhinoscooter1, Jan 5, 2015.

  1. rhinoscooter1

    rhinoscooter1 Member

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    Hello people,
    as you know I took a small break off minecraft and came to realise, There are not many builder who specialise in modern builds so I had a crack at it.
    This build was inspired by Devin Westons house in GTA V, that does not mean I copied it!
    Plot ID:-498;500
    Pics 4 u.
    http://imgur.com/a/I4BaX
    Sorry there was no close up shots, have a look ingame for a better view!
    Thanks a bunch!
    @Efcluke94 @musemat
     
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    Efcluke94 Admin Staff Member Head Administrator Builder

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    The plot isn't finished
     
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    Ermmm... First thing, I don't think there is nearly enough detail in this build, and it doesn't look like you put your best time and effort into this build either. Builders put their best work into everything they build, and when looking at this build, to me, it looks like you did not spend much time at all building this. I personally don't think that this is a builder worthy build. To me, anyone can build this in probably an hour or two.
     
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    Don't get me wrong it looks nice, just one thing Devin's house was on a hill wasn't it? And I see no detail it looks a little rushed try and spend some more time on it.
     
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    More detail in and around the plot to make it look more as a scene rather than a random house in the middle of the plot would make everything look nicer. [ Terraforming, more houses, trees, etc.? ]
     
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    Add some terraforming, more detail, and overall just some other things to make the plot look nicer and more complete, basically what everyone else says. As said in many applications before, it doesn't give us that *wow* factor that the build team is looking for. Keep working on it!
     
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    It is actually a pretty decent miniature villa, but as stated above, it is lacking terraforming and natural structures in general.

    Stick with a theme, for example, if this was in Egypt or a sandy area maybe add some small and even giant towering sand dunes around.
    Maybe add some hill/mountain variations with other households and other things.
     
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    rhinoscooter1 Member

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    correct it was on a hill but I wanted to keep it on the ground so you could get a view
     
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    I know but I wanted to make it without worldedit and when I had finished I had to go.
    Thanks for feedback
     
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    Thank so much guys!
    Really helps
     
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    didnt you use to be a builder? or were you a mod.
     
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    Why no more?
     
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    One shall not speak of the event!
     
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    Why not?
    @boyracer10 it was because I was not an active member of the forums.
     
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    lol i was joking, i meant to put something after but i accidentally clicked "post reply"