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Discussion in 'Creative' started by Raymond_Schmidt, Feb 19, 2014.

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  1. Raymond_Schmidt

    Raymond_Schmidt Member

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    Here are the snapshots of my build. I also included my plot location in the snapshots for anyone that wants to view it real-time. I would also like Efluke for the encouragement.
     

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    I like it a lot but try to add more styles. :)
     
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    I like your way of thinking.
    A few more details, and you're there. :)
     
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    I pretty much told you what I though In-Game, but yeah... (extremely critical inbound) I really like the theme and style of this, as its not one I have seen. The sewers are amazing I love the little details, like adding grids around the town to connect to the sewers. The actual houses are well built, however the roofs need a border of stairs going across to break it up, and perhaps adding chimneys, although I do like the use of logs for this theme. You understand colour coordination well, and no what blocks go with what, which is harder than most people think. I can tell you don't make custom trees, but I like the attempt, shows your trying to be better, perhaps adding a spiral staircase inside leading to a witches brewing station could be good. The roads are a little simplistic, so perhaps mixing one or two blocks might make it more impressive (its nice to experiment). And finally in the forest adding little hills/rockerys/more scenery is encouraged, so it doesn't look so flat and samey. You do have a lot of potential, however its just a few little details here and there.

    If you were to claim another plot and build another theme, to show your more diverse that could increase your chances too.
     
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    Totally agree.. Great examples.. :)
     
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    Good job.
     
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    Okay so I need to try on another plot now?
     
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