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Discussion in 'Creative' started by Eoinje2014, Jun 21, 2015.

  1. Eoinje2014

    Eoinje2014 Member

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    Here is my builder app. This is my plot the id is 33:-226 it is mainly a terraformed build and it has lots of hills trees etc, I only have a few images so join the creative server and look around it warning the creative server crashed so it may look a bit weird... Thanks -JenzoTheJoker. 2015-06-21_11.17.37.png
     

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  2. Sccottyyy

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    It's good, nice choice of blocks but there are a lot of fixes you can do:
    • Terra-form the walls/hills a bit more because it looks like you used the brush on them.
    • Add more detail to your land.
    • Make a good choice of blocks and where to put them. The ratio of stone to grass is the same everywhere. You would not see that amount of stone on the floor and you would not see that amount of dirt in the mountains.
    • Pick a good theme. I can not really see a theme here just a plain piece of land.
    • Tree trunk is good but the leaves just seem like a big block, take inspiration from the real world.
    • Attention to detail. The pond/lake is good but the water source doesn't have a good path going into the lake. The water would destroy the grass and make it dirt or erode it and make it stone. Small things like this make a good build.
    Ask me about anything else and I should be able to help. :)
     
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    Shouldn't screenshots be taking in default texture pack?
     
  4. Eoinje2014

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    Thanks I was going to add loads more but it crashed and its a bit messed up now.
     
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    Keep working on it and it can get somewhere. :)
     
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    Terraforming alone can't get you builder as everyone on the build team can do it. You have to do something unique.
     
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    It could do with some more buildings, as @Discoloration (sort of) said.
     
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    People said enough about the terraforming but in my opinion the treetop looks a bit weird. Too much wood there ;P
     
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    Add something other than terraforming, something that will prove you're not just another average builder.
     
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    Even for a terraforming plot this is not builder worthy:
    2015-06-25_16.31.17.png
    I can still see the //br, seems rushed and unnatural.
    2015-06-25_16.31.27.png
    You didn't even boter to get the water right... ;-;
    2015-06-25_16.31.33.png
    This caused by the crashes or?...
    2015-06-25_16.31.37.png
    Terraforming looks quite derpy in my opinion.
    2015-06-25_16.36.42.png
    Trees look kinda derpy as well.

    I don't think you're ready for builder, I don't want to be harsh, but this is below builder standards. Overall it's a decent plot, just not for builder. @Efcluke94
     
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    I know I had it all smoothed out and it crashed and some custom trees.
     
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    It looks really nice!
    * I really like natural plots!
    * But maybe you can make a little more detail on the ground and walls.

    That is all I'd like to say!
    ~I wish u the best of luck with this