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BGCBerxy Builder Submission

Discussion in 'Creative' started by BGCBerxy, Mar 29, 2015.

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  1. BGCBerxy

    BGCBerxy Member

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    Hey guys I'm bringing my test because the first constructor I forgot to pack textures retire, I hope you like my plot and to improve him in some respects ^ - ^ Thanks. I hope you like: @Discoloration@@TheAdventurerMM@@TlmeLord
    PLOT ID : 35;200 /plot tp -35;200

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    hope you like it :D
     
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    I got one last question for you. Whats the theme? Cuz I see a floating island, castle/house etc. Its a bit confusing.
    Oh and its @TheAdventurerMM and @TlmeLord
     
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    Sorry for the error images 2015-03-29_01.15.32.png 2015-03-29_01.15.32.png 2015-03-29_01.15.32 - copia.png 2015-03-29_01.15.32.png 2015-03-29_01.16.05 - copia.png 2015-03-29_01.16.05.png 2015-03-29_01.16.10 - copia.png 2015-03-29_01.16.10.png 2015-03-29_01.16.17 - copia.png


    And the issue is not something very special touch that only raises something and think ^^
    One idea I had in my head. Still do not quite understand what to send pictures: S
     

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    I must say, even though there are just a couple spots which could use tweaking... dis be very good :eek: A lot better than most applications in my opinion lately ;P
     
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    Why is there someone added to the plot?
     
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    Where does the water come from? 2015-03-29_16.22.00.png
     

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    Oops wrong screenshot.
     
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    Hmmm it's good but I would say: Build some more plots to show your real build skillz
     
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    She's a friend that I wanted to study and only gave but the rest I did myself
     
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    There's not a theme, is there? If there is, I can't see it. The block pallet doesn't seem to match either.
     
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    1) Theme
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    3) Your friend added
    4) A little bit of more details.

    6/10, really nice.
     
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    Make more, like another two or so, and this time focus on a theme. This way, you can show the builders:

    • What you are specialised in.
    • How you can make builds better with that theme (it just seems like a Mario-esque plot at this moment.)
    • And most importantly , the feedback and adding the feedback to your plot. If people know where the plot is struggling at, they would point it out, however with this plot it's hard to point out obvious things. This is all because of the theme.

    Like I said, build another two plots or so, and focus on a theme. Although I do like this plot, there isn't a theme, or a block palette (as @noodles77 mentioned.) overall, the build is good, but lacks the necessities that are essentially required to make a successful builder application.
     
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    I don't understand why the castle is so flat? Why's it so close to the edge? >.>
     
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    [Quote = "Volkom_, post: 222384, miembro: 2792"] Yo no entiendo por qué el castillo es tan plana? ¿Por qué está tan cerca de la orilla? >.> [/ Quote]
    Que cuando juzgar mal los lugares y estoy tan siquiera intentar reparar y decorar

    Lo siento por el desagrado ^^
     
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    Miscalculate the forgiveness spaces, I know there'll stick a little bad
     
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