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Discussion in 'Creative' started by BGCBerxy, Mar 31, 2015.

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  1. BGCBerxy

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    Erm, how long did that take you? It seemed like you had barely just finished your other one o_O
     
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    All day yesterday from the 7de morning until 1 am I just started acerlo and just 1 hours ago I just finished ^^. I hope you like
     
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    Did anyone help you?
     
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    Single-handedly, I devote myself to this
     
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    Ive seen him building this plot, alone. Looks Nice :)
     
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    thank you very much I think you started to see it before it started to take shape
     
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    Listen, you mostly use grass etc. To show your building skills, you may build one plot, which is total different to the other 2. Like, make a desert plot or anything like that. If that one also looks Nice, I think you have a good chance of becoming a builder. ;)
     
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    Thank you very much for that no problem if I can propose, thank you very much for your support ^^
     
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    The cave seems very unnatural and the house is lacking in detail, other than that your build is decent. :p
     
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    would be best to enter the server directs the plot and see for yourself ^^. regards
     
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    Did you use world edit and/or for what?
     
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    only use world edit to replace the bottom of the mountain blocks of mushrooms : 100: 15 only for that, ah ! and put water in the water everything is hand cast , trees , structures, terraforrming , mountains and the rest ; stress that only use world edit to change blocks. . . Regards ^^
     
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    I think this is a great build in general but in my opinion you are missing a few key details that bring the build together. For example, the cliffs and all the rocky mountain terraforming looks amazing, however, the ceiling of the cave is completely flat besides some roots and a patch of dirt. Try to make it look a lot more like a cave by adding arches and raising the ceiling in a few places. Second, the plot almost looks unfinished based on the fact that there are flowers on the overhang side of the plot, and there are none on the side with the trees and the houses. There is also no variation of blocks on the tree side like there is on the overhang sign. Another blank spot I found was on top of the overhang. You can see the stone brick from the cliff house poking through in an unnatural way. If this is what you have planned maybe add some flowers, terrain variation, or bushes and trees around it to make it a little less blatant. Also, the lighthouse platform that the lighthouse is on is a little odd. Instead of having a little rise up to make it more realistic you left it completely flat and all grass, no flowers, no small 1 block high hills. Adding to the facts about the terraforming, the space around the house seems a little lacking of terraforming on one side. (This point is completely my opinion because I am a terraforming freak who likes a incline or hole every few blocks.) Overall, I think that maybe you should have spent a little more time fine tuning this plot and focusing on the small details, like flowers and cave ceilings. As others have said you submitted this application very soon after your first. Take a little more time on your builds and clean them up to make them perfect, it looks like you can but just take the time to do so. I know I am a little harsh and picky but these things just stood out to me when I looked at the build. Everything else looks fab though I love the mushroom cliff idea!
    (My opinion)
     
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    I get better and go up images when already done those details ^^ Thank you. Greats
     
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    what he said. -,- #Lazyness

    7/10
     
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    It's good and you can tell you put a lot of effort into it, but the platform next to the river is kinda random, it looks like youve looked in your inventory and thrown everything down without thinking of what you're placing. Also the roof is waaaaay too big for the sive of the house, other than that I like it :)
     
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    thank you very much , pull all of my inventory I wanted to do at the end xD rockets could do neither the first parq do = <
     
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    try , fight , but I could never do the fireworks I gave up before them
     
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