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Adventure Parkour Map: Toy Store

Discussion in 'Parkour' started by Paco158, Jul 23, 2014.

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Add it to the parkour server? (On Adventure Parkour)

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  1. Paco158

    Paco158 Member

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    2014-07-22_18.02.56.png 2014-07-22_18.02.45.png 2014-07-22_18.03.09.png 2014-07-22_18.03.03.png 2014-07-22_18.03.52.png 2014-07-22_18.04.05.png 2014-07-22_18.03.22.png 2014-07-22_18.04.21.png 2014-07-22_18.04.43.png 2014-07-22_18.05.00.png This is a parkour map that I made with SunshineChick (she built the awesome train!). I don't know if non- builders (me) are allowed to post parkour maps, but I hope the you will get this awesome map on the server. If you want to try the parkour for yourself, go to plot -94;-117. You'll have to get in through the roof, and the start is on the shelf with a ton of signs on it. Up there are some pics of the map.
     
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    You could use corect grammar on the signs, other than that I think it could use some work but a cool idea :D
     
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    Running out of space on the signs :p
     
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    I ran through it, the parkour is easy. The map has a simple design and has no decor.
    I have no idea how this is Toy Story, it's not very original as a concept.
    The map needs more story throughout it, more signs and such.
    Make the parkour a bit difficult at some areas.
    Fill up empty places of the map with decor.
    Sorry if this comes off as rude.
     
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    I also went through this map w/ Matt,
    And I think the idea is amazing. It's so creative, but I don't know if you're really using this amazing idea to its fullest.
    the parkour itself is too simple, too easy. Like Matt said- a better story line throughout the map would make it so much better.
    The space is so empty, maybe add a bed, or bookshelves, etc. Think what a typical kid would have in their room. Cause a computer-- I dunno. Maybe this generation. But if you're basing it off the movie- No computer.
    as amazing as this map is, and amazing it could be with changes, I really like it. :)
     
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    It's not toy story, it is toy store. And I can make it more difficult, and hopefully (if sun comes on >:I) I can decorate more. Personally, I don't like the lighting, how it's random glowstones, and I want to fix that.
     
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    This map has nothing to do with the movie period.
     
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    Someone can close this thread now. I'll post this again when I'm done.
     
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