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Discussion in 'Creative' started by Kahan, Apr 1, 2015.

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  1. Kahan

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    Very detailed, but what exactly is the theme? You wouldn't have ice and lava together, and the trees aren't very well done. I also notice tnt in the bridge?..
     
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    OMG this construction is more beatiful than other construction <3KahanFoBuilder<3
     
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    In this map I relate most with maps of adventures, I wanted to stay more adventurous. I wanted to map called "The towers of hell." About TNT wanted him startled bridge probe different shades and like everything is in "Infernal" plan because anything can happen, the trees are not poorly made my taste, are good, what happens is that the biome is so, lava + water so it would stand in many movies opposites are mixed and wanted to see it so :)
     
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    You definitely think you have much more detail than the last one, but there are still a few things missing. First, I don't get how you have lava, ice and nature all on one plot. Creative, but it makes no sense. Also, the ice and cobblestone one the ground has no pattern, it's all randomized which also doesn't make sense. Lastly, on the towers, you are using way too much cobblestone walls which makes it look repetitive. Try using different blocks too, not just walls, cobble and wood. Try something else. Other than that, gud job mate.
     
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    Unmelting ice shores next to a lava sea with trees growing out of it. A bit confusing.
    Nice job on the towers and bridge though, they look great!
     
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    Your evaluation seems of little imagination, do not say more. regarding the towers are very well detailed the like;) I did not want to overload, movies mixed in different biomes in one area. I do not understand;) And that I'm working on this.
     
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    I wanted to mix between water and ice but seemed to me, it looked bad and poor ... Probe with lava and as I have seen movies and series where mixed biomes in the same area! Thank you comentraio;)
     
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    I would trust Iselciour's judgment, considering he can build this:
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    That was built by Isel ^~^ (with a little help from others) and I do agree with what he says as well. You need to switch up your block choice, you can't use the same blocks over and over again, its boring and repetitive. Although, good job on making it more detailed, you definitely did better but it still needs work ;)
     
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    Alright so, I am being realistic. Lacking creativity and being realistic are two different things. You may like the towers, but it needs more detail. If you don't want to "overload" your build, then use the blocks effectively. Also, this is not a movie. Builders don't base what they build off of movies. They might get inspiration from them, but not to the point where you mix ice and lava. Oh and if you become a builder, you become part of the staff. So Google Translate will not be the best option when you try to communicate with the rest.
     
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    I love your comment, okay that;) I loved, remember that I only did my job, remember that two heads are better than one! Thanks for your comment: D
     
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    If you made the trees dead trees it might help connect the barren themes of fire and ice. Just a suggestion.
     
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    Well, the combination of lava and ice is weird anyway.
     
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    Random reaction on the end... :p
     
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    Also, I don't think you should put that in your application.
     
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    hmmm 7,5/10
     
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    i'm Sorry :( He was motivated
     
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    Do you like it? [​IMG] [​IMG]
     
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    Still doesn't seem to make much sense.. but it's starting to look a little better
     
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