Builds My first ever map

CookiesAlwaysWin · Feb 21, 2017

Hi.

This is just a rlly fast build map (build this in like 2hours)
This is my FIRST ever map created xd
I know its bad! xd
xd
I just learned voxelsniper xd
So enjoy!
XD

Tried making a eggwars map

JerrySox · Feb 21, 2017

If you would have taken more time this would like a lot better. Otherwise not bad for two hours.

CookiesAlwaysWin · Feb 21, 2017

I need to learn ALOT more for voxelsniper etc

Power Ranger · Feb 21, 2017

Looks ok for 2 hours :P If it were to become a real eggwars map you would probably want to remove the double tall grass since its really annoying in pvp :3

ISTY. · Feb 21, 2017

I think you should add more detail, but so far so good, and also, I forgot the name of it, but it reminds of a skywars map. Good job for only building it in 2 hours

matcha · Feb 21, 2017

ISeeThroughYou said:
I think you should add more detail, but so far so good, and also, I forgot the name of it, but it reminds of a skywars map. Good job for only building it in 2 hours

Trees?

Lepzi · Feb 21, 2017

Wow this is amazing man I really like it if you haven't already you should apply for builder you would have a good chance.

xXNiChO_29Xx · Feb 21, 2017

I guess not bad for two hours but if you want a good make dedicate more time and make some good details ^^
Otherwise, good! :)

Marieke2001 · Feb 21, 2017

You used saplings for the trees at the middle. A tip: make trees without the saplings. Do it yourself, that looks way prettier. You're map is cool, but it hasn't much detail and it's just grass and trees.

ISTY. · Feb 21, 2017

Scream said:
Trees?

Yes, probably I don't really play skywars much

CookiesAlwaysWin · Feb 22, 2017

ItzMeReapMC said:
Wow this is amazing man I really like it if you haven't already you should apply for builder you would have a good chance.

Thx for the Nice comment but This is not enough XD

Marieke2001 said:
You used saplings for the trees at the middle. A tip: make trees without the saplings. Do it yourself, that looks way prettier. You're map is cool, but it hasn't much detail and it's just grass and trees.

Ok. :p

Proditio · Feb 22, 2017

Everyone is saying that you need more detail (which would be nice) but what I think you really need is a theme. What you have is a pretty field of grass with some trees, you need something that the players will remember the map by, something that makes it stand out. hope this helps :D

Proditio · Feb 22, 2017

TheChesireMouse said:
Everyone is saying that you need more detail (which would be nice) but what I think you really need is a theme. What you have is a pretty field of grass with some trees, you need something that the players will remember the map by, something that makes it stand out. hope this helps :D

Forgot to say, but I do think for what you have don it looks nice, just cold be better.

Yamin · Feb 22, 2017

It's a good begin, but like others said: it needss more work and time.
Make it a bit more organic: the trees are kinds squares and the islands could also use some improvements.

You can try /b bb to smooth the islands a bit better.
When I make trees I use diamond for the tree itself and gold for the leaves, that way I can get good shapes for my trees. Maybe try that.

Keep it up and keep building!

Fristey · Feb 22, 2017

It's simple, but not bad :P

KidBit · Feb 22, 2017

i like this map i would play it

Golapagos · Feb 22, 2017

Its trees... no water for me to swim in, so i will die q-q. Just kidding! Its a nice map, and a vey good one for your first and for 2 hours! Keep up the good work!

Cubo ㅤ · Feb 22, 2017

ItzMeReapMC said:
Wow this is amazing man I really like it if you haven't already you should apply for builder you would have a good chance.

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Proditio · Feb 22, 2017

Golapagos said:
Its trees... no water for me to swim in, so i will die q-q. Just kidding! Its a nice map, and a vey good one for your first and for 2 hours! Keep up the good work!

why dont any egg war maps really have any water besides ports?

Ellie Williams · Feb 22, 2017

The terrain looks too flat and you should probably use custom trees in the middle island, other than that, good job !

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