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To be honest, imo, it doesn't have any mistakes, I cannot give you a tip because to me it look amazing.
That means a lot to me!
just to clearly indicate that it is my job and not someone else's ;)
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To be honest, imo, it doesn't have any mistakes, I cannot give you a tip because to me it look amazing.
Thank you alot, i'll keep it up for sure!
That means a lot to me!
just to clearly indicate that it is my job and not someone else's ;)
It looks... cheap. There are a number of reasons why I don't like it:
Don't take it bad, it's just opinion on how you could improve
- There are a lot of different styles mixed together. The flowers background, the eggs, the other eggs, etc are all different styles strapped together
- Font inconsistencies. 5 text blocks, 5 different fonts. I'd use the same font everywhere (and, if possible and if looks good, the same that cubectaft uses)
- The Steve and the sign, doesn't really fit imo
- The social logos and their box. I think they shouldn't be on the center and should be smaller. Also, that box is extremely ugly
Don't take it bad, it's just opinion on how you could improve
Really no need to be rude Alain, at least provide constructive criticism.
Anyways.
Its a really good attempt and i can definitely tell you put alot of effort into it however there is certainly a lot to improve on.
The biggest one is consistency. Both the font and stock images you've used have inconsistencies such as font spacing being different and the stock images having weird outlines and different styles to them so my advice is to try and pick one or two at most and stick to a concurrent theme.
A second is quality. Some of the images you've used are relatively low quality which can be ok if thats a theme, but you've paired them with high quality ones so it just looks really out of place and less well done than im sure you would have liked.
Good effort though! Keep trying! The more you practice the better you'll get :)
Anyways.
Its a really good attempt and i can definitely tell you put alot of effort into it however there is certainly a lot to improve on.
The biggest one is consistency. Both the font and stock images you've used have inconsistencies such as font spacing being different and the stock images having weird outlines and different styles to them so my advice is to try and pick one or two at most and stick to a concurrent theme.
A second is quality. Some of the images you've used are relatively low quality which can be ok if thats a theme, but you've paired them with high quality ones so it just looks really out of place and less well done than im sure you would have liked.
Good effort though! Keep trying! The more you practice the better you'll get :)
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